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    dots Submission Name: Silence and Darknessdots
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    Author: TheSnoitart
    ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53/64/52
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    The preacher man will tell you
    "And God said, Let there be Light"
    like light is the most important
    thing ever to happen.

    What then, I ask
    existed before he spoke?
    Where was God before
    "Let there be Light?"

    Even now, in that light
    that he so graciously gave us
    where, oh where has our deity gone
    where, oh where can he be?

    Even now, God is in the darkness
    the Truth is in the silence.
    Light makes our illusions and delusions.
    His only mistake was creation.




    Submitted on 2013-10-25 22:58:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Check out my post "Untitled" I think you'll find it relevant.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-10-25 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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