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Silence and Darkness

Author: TheSnoitart
ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
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Words: 90
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Silence and Darkness

The preacher man will tell you
"And God said, Let there be Light"
like light is the most important
thing ever to happen.

What then, I ask
existed before he spoke?
Where was God before
"Let there be Light?"

Even now, in that light
that he so graciously gave us
where, oh where has our deity gone
where, oh where can he be?

Even now, God is in the darkness
the Truth is in the silence.
Light makes our illusions and delusions.
His only mistake was creation.

Submitted on 2013-10-25 22:58:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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