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    dots Submission Name: The Lonely Seadots
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    Author: TheSnoitart
    ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53/64/52
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Lonely Seadots
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    A sunset by a lonely sea
    I stand before eternity
    black waters reach for endless night
    and slowly now I lose my sight

    It stretches on forevermore
    the dark has finally won that war
    and now, at peace, we see at last
    the days before creation's past

    The night drifts on at its own pace
    look up and squint to see God's face
    He's peering down at all mankind
    forgetting, just for now, he's blind

    My hands reach out like someone's there
    and meet with handfuls of thin air
    I cry for someone's company
    standing beside this lonely sea




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      Great poem.. I enjoyed it very much.... Desi
    | Posted on 2013-11-19 00:00:00 | by Desi | [ Reply to This ]
      Perhaps infinite possibility is what made matter out of endless void and inky blackness (as opposed to some calculable law of physics). Perhaps this is why loneliness seems to rend our self assuredness leaving us craving the simplicities of companionship.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-10-25 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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