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    dots Submission Name: Forever Yoursdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.41 - 5/110/127
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsForever Yoursdots
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    I never thought i'd love someone,
    Just didn't seem possible.
    I meet you.
    I feel different.
    I feel reborn.
    Darkness faded,
    Light took it's place.
    Fell in love in an instant,
    Guess you could say it was love at first sight.
    I don't see how I ever lived without you,
    And I never want to.
    That's a life i can't even imagine.
    And yet.
    That's the life i am living,
    That's the life i have to live.
    Why am i still going?
    Why don't i give up?
    Because i made a promise.
    A promise that triumphs over all..
    One promise..
    And that is to be..
    Forever Yours.




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