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    dots Submission Name: Worrydots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWorrydots
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    Its late at night, I start to drift. You pull me close for one last kiss.
    Holding me tight you don't let go. Making me feel safe and warm.
    Your breath is soft in and out, so deep and calm, makes my heart pout.
    As your heart beats, mine starts to ache. I lay there tired but awake.
    I worry for myself and you, and wonder what this will lead too.
    I'm thinking way to much again. And fearing that this all will end.
    Refocus back on loving you, because that's all I know to do.
    I kiss your cheek, your lips and head. And tell myself to go to bed.




    Submitted on 2013-10-26 19:12:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think you did a good job writing this. Very passionate.
    | Posted on 2013-10-30 00:00:00 | by ALonesomeGuy | [ Reply to This ]


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