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    dots Submission Name: Three Little Wordsdots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThree Little Wordsdots
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    Everytime I see your eyes, I get a feeling deep inside.
    I want to let it out, I do, but I don't know how to tell you.
    A deep breath turns into sighing, I turn away my heart crying.
    Three little words I long to say, I wish there was another way,
    To let you know just how I feel, a way of proving this is real.
    I lean in close, give you a kiss. I pray that you'll see what this is.
    I try again, my voice it breaks. I sigh, my knees, they start to quake.
    I smile at you, you smile to me. This is a happy place to be.
    Head full of dreams, body full of nerves. Hoping we'll share
    Three little words




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