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    dots Submission Name: Dreamsdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.41 - 5/110/127
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    dotsDreamsdots
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    I lay my head down,
    And melt away.
    Dream the darkest dreams,
    Even on the lightest of days.
    Reasons of life flood me,
    Reason to live elude me.
    I cringe in pain,
    I cry to see..
    See the reason,
    The reason for my dream.
    It causes so much hate,
    I'm sad to see it so extreme.
    But these..
    These are my dreams..
    My nightmares..
    That only i see..
    When i lay my head down,
    And try to dream a better dream..





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