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    dots Submission Name: Paradisedots
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    Author: ALonesomeGuy
    Elite Ratio:    0.88 - 1/5/12
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsParadisedots
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    In that cold, unyielding darkness,
    Of which i often speak,
    Where the moon sings to me so softly,
    So alas I will not weep.

    Like a spider sitting quietly,
    Weaving silk so soft and fine,
    I too, in imagination,
    Spin this sordid tale of mine.

    I often think of paradise,
    Sitting on this lonesome chair,
    Where the angels sing their melodies,
    And dance upon the air.

    Then i gaze out on that darkness,
    Of which I so often speak,
    Upon my eyes tears start to well,
    Then i close my eyes and weep.

    I looked upon the moon,
    Girt in her starry dress,
    She smiled at me pitifully,
    And sang that song her best.

    Sudden realization,
    Shakes me from my tears,
    When alas i finally understand,
    That paradise in here.




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