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    dots Submission Name: No promise brokendots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/132
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsNo promise brokendots
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    Never make a promise to a girl,
    That you don't plan to keep.
    This is my motto,
    My way of life.
    I will never break my promises,
    No matter what happens.
    These are my promises...
    My heart is forever yours...
    I will be there for you at any moment...
    I will not die as long you want me alive...
    I am forever yours...
    Now.
    The hard part.
    You only want me to keep the last one..
    Well that..
    That is to bad.
    You are not stopping me.
    Remember...
    No.
    Promise.
    Broken.




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