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    dots Submission Name: The dark withindots
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    Author: ALonesomeGuy
    Elite Ratio:    0.88 - 1/5/12
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe dark withindots
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    Often time people are busy,
    They hurry to and fro,
    So quickly, most times they forget,
    the darkness within grows.

    Of man and beasts alike,
    The darkness dwells within,
    Unrelenting and unyielding,
    Waiting for the chance to win.

    While you do the same thing,
    Every day and every week,
    The darkness within rages,
    The sound it makes does not grow weak.

    That is why we must conceal it,
    That darkness deep within,
    Caged deep within our heart,
    Where we hope it will not win.




    Submitted on 2013-10-27 21:26:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the message in this.

    Sorry, I usually try and write more descriptive comments, but kind of on my phone.
    | Posted on 2013-11-05 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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