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    dots Submission Name: Rhythmdots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 484
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 753



    Description:
       Nothing at all like anything I've posted before :-p enjoy. Comments are welcome


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    dotsRhythmdots
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    A magical slip and slide, close your eyes, let's take a ride.
    The heat is up, begging for more. Feel as pants slide to the floor.
    Ooey, gooey, sticky, wet. You ain't seen nothing yet.
    Pulsing pleasures growing stronger, can't take it, not much longer.
    Feeling on the verge, you know, time to break and take it slow.
    Tease, tempt, taste, and touch. Taking time, no need to rush.
    Rub, lick, nibble, kiss. Swoon and swirl, total bliss.
    Moving faster as we go, intensity, it starts to grow.
    Trying to hold off so long, but the urges are to strong.
    Feeling about to explode, grunt and groan, unleash the load.
    A moan, a twitch, a pleasured sigh. Feeling warm and satisfied.




    Submitted on 2013-10-29 00:18:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      So what's going on here? Are we sweating to the oldies with Richard Simmons?

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-10-29 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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