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    dots Submission Name: The Battledots

    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
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    dotsThe Battledots

    I am a Christian, and I have sinned.
    I've fought with the devil and I've been pinned.

    That don't mean Satan's won the fight.
    My mighty God is the bringer of light.

    HE'll stop that demon right in its tracks,
    and help me to see through the devil's acts.

    It looks to me, with a wicked glance.
    I get back up, it don't stand a chance.

    Swords clash as the battle wages on.
    I won't stop fighting till the evil one is gone.

    Submitted on 2013-10-29 14:41:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awesome. It's positive over negative. I like it and have written similar stuff. I can relate and feel the same way at times.
    | Posted on 2013-12-02 00:00:00 | by TeslaKoyal | [ Reply to This ]

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