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Author: Katlord
ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375 /199 /101
Words: 117
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I've walked with the devil, I've sat at it's feet.
I didn't know it lied, just that it's words were sweet.

It covered up a hole that I needed to fill.
But the only way to fill it was through God's will.

I prayed to HIM for guidance and HE opened up my eyes.
HE showed me that Satan told nothing but lies.

I thought it all was good, but I see that it was bad.
Satan lost me as a solider, and I think that makes it mad.

When the world seems against me, and nothing is going right.
I rest assure that the Lord is beside me as I fight.

Submitted on 2013-10-29 14:52:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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