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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    I've walked with the devil, I've sat at it's feet.
    I didn't know it lied, just that it's words were sweet.

    It covered up a hole that I needed to fill.
    But the only way to fill it was through God's will.

    I prayed to HIM for guidance and HE opened up my eyes.
    HE showed me that Satan told nothing but lies.

    I thought it all was good, but I see that it was bad.
    Satan lost me as a solider, and I think that makes it mad.

    When the world seems against me, and nothing is going right.
    I rest assure that the Lord is beside me as I fight.




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