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    dots Submission Name: Day 38: Hangmandots
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    Author: Zai
    ASL Info:    24/m/US
    Elite Ratio:    3.97 - 66/145/98
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Day 38 of my 365 challenge. I thought the twist I came up with was pretty intriguing. I might expand on the idea of a puzzle so easy to solve, but so hard to understand. Kinda just sounds like life, though. Meh.


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    dotsDay 38: Hangmandots
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    Thirteen thousand,
    Eight hundred and forty three letters.
    I can't lose.
    But you'll still be gone forever.
    I'll guess and guess,
    I'm never wrong.
    I know every letter, one to twenty six,
    But put them in that order,
    and it's foreign and mixed.
    Every other combination,
    separately,
    I get.
    But when has 'courage' been defined as 'anger'?
    When has 'stable' meant 'collect'?
    'Next' does not mean 'better'.
    'More' does not mean 'easy'.
    'Happy' does not mean 'wrong'.
    'I'm getting tired' is not a sign of music,
    There is no tune to this song.

    My first guess is 'I'
    It's in there a thousand, twenty three times.
    No more selfish a letter, on that you can bet.
    'M' and 'E' are next, combined they frost the cake.
    Hang on, I'm not done with 'U' yet!
    'R' you going to play?
    I suggest 'N' (ding) it soon.
    Please, just start again with 'A'.




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      that was very confusing at first but then i read it a couple of times and then I relized it was the game hangman!!!!
    | Posted on 2013-11-01 00:00:00 | by cheythompson | [ Reply to This ]


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