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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 27
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    He took my hand. He smiled at me.
    My heart he had won.

    He's so special to me. A gift from God.
    He is my son.




    Submitted on 2013-10-30 07:10:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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