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Author: Teofila
ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210 /104 /71
Words: 180
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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For my Shadow...although he will probably never read this himself...


You know I'll never leave
Just don't push me away
I'll remember all the promises
That we've ever made
I intend to keep each one
Just as long as you will stay
Please don't leave me
Listen to what I say
I won't leave
I won't betray
To keep you living
Just one more day
I will fight
And I would die
Just to know that you're ok
If you leave
Take the memories
All the ones I have of you
Of us
Make me forget
So I won't live in pain
Or on the other hand
Please just stay
Talk to me
Tell me how you feel
Even if I don't agree
I want to help
I'll hear you out
Completely through
I just want you to know
I am here for you
No matter where
No matter the time
Always know
You're on my mind
I want to help
Just let me in
You already know
You're my best-friend
I tell you everything
Please do the same
All it takes?
Just say my name...

Submitted on 2013-10-30 18:57:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I think i can speak for all of your shadows when i say... We appreciate everything.
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