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    dots Submission Name: Shadowdots

    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       For my Shadow...although he will probably never read this himself...

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    You know I'll never leave
    Just don't push me away
    I'll remember all the promises
    That we've ever made
    I intend to keep each one
    Just as long as you will stay
    Please don't leave me
    Listen to what I say
    I won't leave
    I won't betray
    To keep you living
    Just one more day
    I will fight
    And I would die
    Just to know that you're ok
    If you leave
    Take the memories
    All the ones I have of you
    Of us
    Make me forget
    So I won't live in pain
    Or on the other hand
    Please just stay
    Talk to me
    Tell me how you feel
    Even if I don't agree
    I want to help
    I'll hear you out
    Completely through
    I just want you to know
    I am here for you
    No matter where
    No matter the time
    Always know
    You're on my mind
    I want to help
    Just let me in
    You already know
    You're my best-friend
    I tell you everything
    Please do the same
    All it takes?
    Just say my name...

    Submitted on 2013-10-30 18:57:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think i can speak for all of your shadows when i say... We appreciate everything.
    | Posted on 2013-10-31 00:00:00 | by ForgottenGraves | [ Reply to This ]

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