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    dots Submission Name: Your Nothingdots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 376
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 925



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       This is for you....you know who you are...when will you give up?


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    dotsYour Nothingdots
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    You know what?
    I can't make you happy
    Any more than you will let yourself be.
    Just please,
    Won't you listen to me?
    I can't love you,
    I can't hate you,
    All I can do for you
    Is nothing.
    I am useless to you.
    All I'll do is upset you.
    Why can't you see that?
    I don't enjoy hurting you
    But you're not helping yourself
    By staying in your hearts jail
    Chained to a person
    You think you love.
    When will you learn
    Its not enough?
    When will you break the chains?
    Finally just give up?
    When will you figure it out
    That I'm not the one you love?
    I am not the one you need.
    All I am
    Is a useless 'friend'
    But in the end
    What am I?
    I'll tell you what I am,
    I am your nothing...




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    ||| Comments |||
      I want a duet with you
    | Posted on 2013-12-12 00:00:00 | by LAMENTATIONS | [ Reply to This ]
      A friend is not nothing. And certainly not useless. Friendship is a beautiful thing. :) I hope you find what you're looking for.
    | Posted on 2013-11-05 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]


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