[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Angeldots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 497
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 837


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    You there,
    Shimmering angel.
    Don't leave me.
    You're all i have.
    All i love.
    The only source..
    Source of happiness.
    You've kept me alive,
    Even when i'm on the brink of death.
    You've kept me happy,
    When all i wanna do is cry.
    You've made me..
    The somebody i always wanted to be.
    You leave me now..
    And i won't know how to live..
    How to function..
    How to exist..
    I'll be a nobody again.
    Just something that doesn't need to exist..
    I don't need to come home.
    I just need you to stay here.
    I don't need your warmth.
    Just need to know your warmth is there..
    I need...
    My angel..

    Submitted on 2013-10-30 20:50:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      This is a really strong piece. It speaks volumes of pain and at the same time, strength and resilience. You can endure anything, as long as your Angel is still here. Whoever or whatever this Angel is, I'm glad you have one and I hope it stays well. Thanks for sharing, and keep writing!
    | Posted on 2013-11-03 00:00:00 | by TheSnoitart | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Every..... written by jackz
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Happy Saint Patrick's Day written by poetotoe
    Before, Now, & After written by SincerWritinAsh
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    Estranged / Shocks written by Daniel Barlow
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    written by Daniel Barlow
    AI written by poetotoe
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Summer written by layDsayD
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Linger written by saartha
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    Whiteout written by layDsayD




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]