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    dots Submission Name: I love you foreverdots
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    Author: wheatstraw
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    dotsI love you foreverdots
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    i love you with all my heart
    i will love you til death due us part.
    i lost you once before
    but i hope i wont lose you agian.
    god told us we're meant to be
    forever and ever its true.
    i will love you forever eternaly
    with all my heart and might.




    Submitted on 2013-10-31 14:19:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      is the due intentional?

    Like, "i love you with all my heart
    i will love you til death due us part."

    makes me think that death is due. That you feel like you have to die.

    "i will love you til death do us part."

    truthfully, I would just rather know the truth of whats going on than anything else.

    Don't ever resort to death. I know there are a lot of times where it gets hard, where the weight is unbearable, but just do justice to everything and the world will rejoice. Peace of everything.

    | Posted on 2013-11-06 00:00:00 | by Passionbyapathy | [ Reply to This ]


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