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    dots Submission Name: Lifetimedots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
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       Wish it weren't true

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    Funny thing really.
    You spend your entire life..
    Trying to find happiness.
    Trying to find someone to love.
    Some people spend an entire lifetime on this.
    I found it after 16 years.
    Found true happiness.
    Found my true love.
    Nothing could be better.
    Except having it back..
    To not have it ripped away from me...
    Now i have to fight for it back.
    I have to wait for the right opportunity.
    The right moment..
    These things are what i have to wait for..
    Even if it takes a lifetime..

    Submitted on 2013-11-01 17:45:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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