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    dots Submission Name: Forgetting to the Sound of Silencedots
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    Author: brokenmuse
    ASL Info:    26/F/AL
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 756/734/161
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsForgetting to the Sound of Silencedots
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    Shredded hearts
    and echoes of laughter long dead
    Candy painted sweet lips
    and memories of that touch
    Nights warmed by a fire
    Sweat slicked cool naked flesh
    As the fire consumes.
    Consumes. Consumes. Consumes.
    So many memories, and tears
    It is nothing, suddenly,
    to want to plunge endless
    into the sweet abyss of
    forgetfulness.
    Let us pray
    Let us pray
    Pray to forget
    For that heated ardor to cool
    until the touches no longer sear
    Until there is no more fear.
    Until all the ghosts have stopped wailing
    And somber silence's solace
    Is all that remains.




    Submitted on 2013-11-02 14:51:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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