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I'll Remember To Howl

Author: Rhettawolf
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Class/Type: Poetry /Nostalgia
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I'll Remember To Howl

I'll remember
what you said to me.
Of you loving me
like the wind loves to rustle the trees.
And I'll remember to howl
to the wind
of your words.
I'll remember of the beautiful place
I went during the summer's hot era.
Of the mountains with snow,
and towering aspens,
and journeys unknown.
I'll remember that beautiful place
of freedom
and I'll remember to howl.
I'll remember
the night air through my coat
as I run
trying to find you.
Black with gray-blue lights shining from the darkness of your fur.
I'll howl my love for you.
And I'll remember to howl
until the day that I fall.
And even then,
that won't stop me
from reliving it all.

Submitted on 2013-11-03 06:45:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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