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    dots Submission Name: I'll Remember To Howldots
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    Author: Rhettawolf
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 6/6/17
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    dotsI'll Remember To Howldots
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    I'll remember
    what you said to me.
    Of you loving me
    like the wind loves to rustle the trees.
    And I'll remember to howl
    to the wind
    of your words.
    I'll remember of the beautiful place
    I went during the summer's hot era.
    Of the mountains with snow,
    and towering aspens,
    and journeys unknown.
    I'll remember that beautiful place
    of freedom
    and I'll remember to howl.
    I'll remember
    the night air through my coat
    as I run
    trying to find you.
    Black with gray-blue lights shining from the darkness of your fur.
    I'll howl my love for you.
    And I'll remember to howl
    until the day that I fall.
    And even then,
    that won't stop me
    from reliving it all.




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