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    dots Submission Name: Is this the end?dots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 5/118/134
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsIs this the end?dots
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    The pain,
    Keeps growing.
    Into something..
    Something i can no longer handle.
    It feels as if..
    As if my heart will explode at any moment.
    My tongue,
    Has memorized the taste of blood.
    My lungs,
    Have forgotten how to fill with air.
    It's happened all so fast.
    Now that i've found my angel,
    It seems that it's time for her to take me away.
    I don't want to believe it but...
    Is this the end?




    Submitted on 2013-11-03 18:20:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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