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    dots Submission Name: To youdots

    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 625
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       Its a slow song. Not all relationships last forever, it doesn't make them bad. Comments are welcome. Enjoy.

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    dotsTo youdots

    Some things, are meant to be
    Some things, are not
    I believed when I met you
    That it was love I sought.
    You took my hand, and lead me
    Into a promising land
    Filled me with self confidence
    And helped me to stand.

    To you I am thankful
    For all that you've done.
    When I was lost in darkness
    You showed me the sun.
    You've touched me in a way
    I've never felt before
    Giving me the courage
    To let my heart soar.

    I shared with you,
    the stories, of my life.
    the battles that I fought alone
    All of the strife.
    Instead of running 'way from me
    you stood by my side.
    You helped me gather up again
    And built me up inside.


    To you I am grateful
    Despite where this may lead.
    You've given me hope again,
    Planted the seed.
    You showed me, the world
    at it's best
    When I, thought it,
    Was a hopeless mess.


    To you I am thankful,
    Yes to you I am thankful
    for everything.

    Submitted on 2013-11-03 20:06:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thank you for posting. It truly is beautiful. I wish I could be this open with my crush. :)
    | Posted on 2013-11-05 00:00:00 | by Rhettawolf | [ Reply to This ]

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