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To you

Author: Katlord
ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375 /199 /101
Words: 184
Class/Type: Lyrics /Love
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Its a slow song. Not all relationships last forever, it doesn't make them bad. Comments are welcome. Enjoy.

To you

Some things, are meant to be
Some things, are not
I believed when I met you
That it was love I sought.
You took my hand, and lead me
Into a promising land
Filled me with self confidence
And helped me to stand.

To you I am thankful
For all that you've done.
When I was lost in darkness
You showed me the sun.
You've touched me in a way
I've never felt before
Giving me the courage
To let my heart soar.

I shared with you,
the stories, of my life.
the battles that I fought alone
All of the strife.
Instead of running 'way from me
you stood by my side.
You helped me gather up again
And built me up inside.


To you I am grateful
Despite where this may lead.
You've given me hope again,
Planted the seed.
You showed me, the world
at it's best
When I, thought it,
Was a hopeless mess.


To you I am thankful,
Yes to you I am thankful
for everything.

Submitted on 2013-11-03 20:06:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Thank you for posting. It truly is beautiful. I wish I could be this open with my crush. :)
| Posted on 2013-11-05 00:00:00 | by Rhettawolf | [ Reply to This ]

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