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    dots Submission Name: To youdots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 655
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1255



    Description:
       Its a slow song. Not all relationships last forever, it doesn't make them bad. Comments are welcome. Enjoy.


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    dotsTo youdots
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    (Verse1)
    Some things, are meant to be
    Some things, are not
    I believed when I met you
    That it was love I sought.
    You took my hand, and lead me
    Into a promising land
    Filled me with self confidence
    And helped me to stand.

    (Chorus)
    To you I am thankful
    For all that you've done.
    When I was lost in darkness
    You showed me the sun.
    You've touched me in a way
    I've never felt before
    Giving me the courage
    To let my heart soar.

    (Verse2)
    I shared with you,
    the stories, of my life.
    the battles that I fought alone
    All of the strife.
    Instead of running 'way from me
    you stood by my side.
    You helped me gather up again
    And built me up inside.

    (Chorus)

    (Verse3)
    To you I am grateful
    Despite where this may lead.
    You've given me hope again,
    Planted the seed.
    You showed me, the world
    at it's best
    When I, thought it,
    Was a hopeless mess.

    (Chorus)

    To you I am thankful,
    Yes to you I am thankful
    for everything.




    Submitted on 2013-11-03 20:06:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Thank you for posting. It truly is beautiful. I wish I could be this open with my crush. :)
    | Posted on 2013-11-05 00:00:00 | by Rhettawolf | [ Reply to This ]


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