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    dots Submission Name: Fear of Dreamingdots
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    Author: TheSnoitart
    ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53/64/52
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsFear of Dreamingdots
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    I fell asleep
    with the words of a dying poem
    on my lips.

    That bittersweet kiss carried me
    to a half-finished life
    and nothing to say.
    Now, my message forgotten
    I stare at this glass cage
    and pace these broken corridors
    and wonder why
    I cant (don't want to) remember
    how it ends.




    Submitted on 2013-11-04 12:32:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a beautiful piece. Good job and keep writing!
    | Posted on 2013-11-04 00:00:00 | by Rhettawolf | [ Reply to This ]


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