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Author: ForgottenGraves
ASL Info:    20, Male
Elite Ratio:    0.49 - 5 /121 /135
Words: 84
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Reeeeeeaaaaaaallllllllllly bad sorry I know


They keep asking,
Why don't you show your face?
They keep begging me,
To come out of hiding.
I would love to,
If I wasn't scared of being hurt again.
If I wasn't so badly hurt already.
So I shall stay here.
Hiding my soul,
Hiding my being.
Why force myself into pain?
I see no reason.
Hiding is my only safety,
Even if I miss out on greatness.
I will hide until a day I see fit.
For now..
This is my sanctuary.

Submitted on 2013-11-04 17:12:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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