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    dots Submission Name: Hidingdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.42 - 5/111/127
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 392
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    Bytes: 537



    Description:
       Reeeeeeaaaaaaallllllllllly bad sorry I know


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    dotsHidingdots
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    They keep asking,
    Why don't you show your face?
    They keep begging me,
    To come out of hiding.
    I would love to,
    If I wasn't scared of being hurt again.
    If I wasn't so badly hurt already.
    So I shall stay here.
    Hiding my soul,
    Hiding my being.
    Why force myself into pain?
    I see no reason.
    Hiding is my only safety,
    Even if I miss out on greatness.
    I will hide until a day I see fit.
    For now..
    This is my sanctuary.




    Submitted on 2013-11-04 17:12:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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