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    dots Submission Name: Snow Wolfdots
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    Author: Rhettawolf
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 6/6/17
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Me
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    dotsSnow Wolfdots
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    Snow wolf,
    dancing with the winds.
    Elegant as the quivering pine branches,
    swift as the flowing current beneath the ice
    on which you stand.
    Snow wolf,
    your thick white coat,
    dark blue eyes,
    coal black claws.
    Beautiful in every way.
    You run on the drifts,
    like flying on earth.
    Snow wolf,
    so unlike I,
    beautiful and free
    yet you remind me,
    of someone I know.
    Someone deep down inside
    trying to hide
    beneath my skin.
    I know snow wolf,
    we are one.
    Snow wolf, trying to hide,
    but that's rather hard
    when every time
    I look into the water
    I see you instead.
    Snow wolf, snow wolf
    deep down inside.
    Come out, come out
    to the other side.




    Submitted on 2013-11-04 19:43:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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