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Snow Wolf

Author: Rhettawolf
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Snow Wolf

Snow wolf,
dancing with the winds.
Elegant as the quivering pine branches,
swift as the flowing current beneath the ice
on which you stand.
Snow wolf,
your thick white coat,
dark blue eyes,
coal black claws.
Beautiful in every way.
You run on the drifts,
like flying on earth.
Snow wolf,
so unlike I,
beautiful and free
yet you remind me,
of someone I know.
Someone deep down inside
trying to hide
beneath my skin.
I know snow wolf,
we are one.
Snow wolf, trying to hide,
but that's rather hard
when every time
I look into the water
I see you instead.
Snow wolf, snow wolf
deep down inside.
Come out, come out
to the other side.

Submitted on 2013-11-04 19:43:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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