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    dots Submission Name: Maplewood Wy.dots
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    Author: Sethesin
    Elite Ratio:    3.62 - 226/173/142
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMaplewood Wy.dots
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    Hours to hang about in
    Loosely hung together, in company
    Alone, wherever

    Rooms float off, whirling
    Terrible bubbles running over
    Past you into blue

    Something's in the attic
    Colder than morning
    But not as new

    No sea whispers
    Just blooming rain
    Leaf touches leaf

    Lights out, no sleep




    Submitted on 2013-11-04 23:00:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Paints a picture of a modest life.

    Hours spent inside, regardless of who you're with or where you are. Maybe lost inside yourself?

    Rooms floating... you must have a high vantage point to look out the window.

    Third Stanza eludes me... please explain :) It's like a riddle.

    No magic, just rain and leaf
    drenched in darkness, but still awake

    I like this write, it's relate-able, as are most of recent
    If you'd ever like to discuss writing you can reach me in a message anytime.

    I can tell you, sometimes there's nothing more special than snuggling under covers watching the rain
    | Posted on 2013-11-05 00:00:00 | by Passionbyapathy | [ Reply to This ]


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