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    dots Submission Name: Past Wailsdots
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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 41/64/76
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsPast Wailsdots
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    Your minds eye
    is slowly waking up
    to the power of your voice
    allowing tolerance
    forging the innate transformation
    of a kinder time.

    ~*~

    regretfully
    through the mist of a floral scent;
    you plead with your past
    you reach out and caress that moment

    your mind transcends it to the future
    slowly it grounds its roots
    bridging back the time that was

    you forget the spontaneous
    you leave yourself mundane
    Wailing for the joy of a pleasure

    Your mind never resting to just be
    the thoughts are all constricting
    facilitating the event
    into the meager desire to let go.

    Don’t let all this be your function
    set afire the roots that are inspired to hold you back
    let your ashes ride the wind through all that is.

    I know you might contend with the spirit that surrounds you…but I wouldn’t want you to be left holding the broken glass that seeks to be pieces.




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