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    dots Submission Name: Absolutiondots

    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.29 - 207/277/230
    Words: 218
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       piece of something, more to come

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    I've got less time than when I used to obsess about it
    tied to this time-line bull-shit with the rest of us
    still feel like it's a struggle to always take the best from it
    always learn the hardest lessons in the worst way possible
    tripping over obstacles and
    never failing to make a mess out of a situation
    diminished capacity to practice
    conserved consciousness with tame patience,
    hard to stand tall when I can't pull ahead of my station
    bless this nation for quantifying the bottom line
    ambition by the way-side, made to stay in my lane
    emotion fluid like the bay tide, still livid
    with those that took and gave and still talked shit
    smiled with white teeth then choked at the bit
    still in this game I just hate to play ball
    while you sit down and take advantage,
    promise I don't hold a grudge,
    I'm not a savage
    but I know you've got experience,
    I wasn't rattling your cage to rap battle you
    I shouldn't of hassled you, it wasn't serious
    I know damn well you mince words
    I thought some might be curious
    never thought they'd be furious with me
    give me two days in a studio
    a sick beat and a purpose
    watch and listen
    to this soul expanding anyway.

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      You seem to think we all have the right to extrapolate without repercussions, I remind you writer responsible for all problems he create!!
    | Posted on 2013-11-08 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      I was more talking Hip-Hop here... not every write is political, or social, or economical, or ecological, or even senseless. I write all manners and fashions to re-purpose and reposition. I am ambivalence embodied, stray hearts and lazy hobbies. I just write for my ambition and say fuck the other lobbies.
    | Posted on 2013-11-06 00:00:00 | by Passionbyapathy | [ Reply to This ]
      I can't decide wether you want to abdicate your right to fight, or if your just wishing you could be absolved from the need for it "still in this game I just hate to play ball". The manumissional treatise our nation blesses us all with sometimes feels that way for me too but I'm so damn happy I've got a right to it that the fact I've got a "station" doesn't bother me anymore. In fact, if everybody(I use the term loosely armed democracy) rocked these facts on the quantum we might be able to truly quantify that bottom line, battle rap and all. Who am I to mince words……hum…often guilty I guess.

    | Posted on 2013-11-05 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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