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    dots Submission Name: Feel Thatdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsFeel Thatdots
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    Can you feel that?
    That spark of hope.
    That dream again being ignited.
    Cause i can.
    Did you feel that?
    That burst of light,
    Washing away the darkness for a split second.
    Cause i did.
    I feel that..
    That my hopes..
    My dreams..
    They are now possible.
    I don't know why,
    But now i'm more optimistic than ever.
    And i stand by that.
    You know why?
    Cause i think...
    I feel...
    That you too..
    Feel that.




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