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    dots Submission Name: First Grade dots
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    Author: Kael Fenshir
    ASL Info:    26 / M / That weird place
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 17/57/52
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsFirst Grade dots
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    Black beaks
    Children stories
    Like a child
    You hid in the wild

    Savoring every little treat
    Always skipping on the vegetable greens

    Foreign languages
    Hard to learn
    Think of it like algebra
    Low grades don't make the curve

    Beautifully dismembered
    No wooden cane to hold

    National pride
    Jumbles the mind
    Running syrup
    Straight from the spine

    Clouded judgement?
    Got a lazy eye?
    Think of me
    The one who made you cry




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      This you may have to explain, as I am totally clueless. The title goes well with the first few stanzas then it seems like maybe again you went personal. It's cool if that's the case rather I just miss something.
    | Posted on 2015-07-04 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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