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    dots Submission Name: Destinydots
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    Author: Katastrophe6
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    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsDestinydots
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    My heart is breaking at the seams
    Beneath the surface is unclean
    Why don't they see what's happening
    I've lost it all I can not breathe

    I'm dying peacefully I'm ready now
    I'd rather die than fight the fight
    I feel the pain start screaming in
    No regrets for the pain within

    These ugly scars upon my skin
    The pain I feel when I see them
    I wish I could quit but this is it
    The blood will run as my heart will race
    This is my destiny, this is my fate.




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