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    dots Submission Name: Demonsdots
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    Author: Rhettawolf
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 6/6/17
    Words: 2068
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Venting
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       story: me
    song: "Demons" by Imagine Dragons
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    When the days are cold
    And the cards all fold
    And the saints we see
    Are all made of gold

    The autumn winds chilled me as I passed the golden angel. You passed me with 'her' at your arm. You gave me a loving glance, and I knew your heart had no room for her. We are both wolves, but I alone am a beast.

    When your dreams all fail
    And the ones we hail
    Are the worst of all
    And the blood’s run stale

    And my heart melted as I bathed in your stare. But the cold, iron core only hardened as I knew deep down inside you could never be mine, and I could never be yours. My blood crusted inside of my veins.

    I wanna hide the truth
    I wanna shelter you
    But with the beast inside
    There’s nowhere we can hide

    At night, I saw you. A beautiful black animal with gray-blue eyes. You barked a playful greeting at me, but I looked away. I heard your confused whine and your paw-steps coming towards me. I wanted to leap over there and comfort you, but the monster inside of me held me back. The beast wanted to corner you.


    No matter what we breed
    We still are made of greed
    This is my kingdom come
    This is my kingdom come

    You pressed your muzzle into my fur, but I pushed you away. I loved you. 'She' would never let you go. 'She' was greedy. 'She' was obsessed. You were too polite. And when I met you, you were my Garden of Eden.
    When you feel my heat
    Look into my eyes
    It's where my demons hide
    It's where my demons hide
    Don't get too close
    It's dark inside
    It's where my demons hide
    It's where my demons hide

    I growled softly, and when you persisted, I snarled. You narrowed your eyes in sadness, confusion, and shock. I was telling you not to get too attached because you would just get your heart broken. My anger, hatred, horror, sadness, and broken heart all personified into a horrible monster who would push you away anyway. A demon.

    Curtain’s call
    Is the last of all
    When the lights fade out
    All the sinners crawl

    The last of my faith and happiness was boxed up. Swallowed up by the demon inside. It was clawing its way up through my gut and up my throat. I let out a whine as an urge to draw your blood flooded my mind.

    So they dug your grave
    And the masquerade
    Will come calling out
    At the mess you've made

    You start to back away. You are scared. With horror, I realize I want you to be scared. I want to hurt you. I want to unleash all of the pain I've been bottling up inside for so long onto you. I howl for you to go away. But you are stubborn. You whimper my name.

    Don't wanna let you down
    But I am hell bound
    Though this is all for you
    Don't wanna hide the truth

    I feel the demon getting pushed down again. It has to start over. I run at you and tackle you to the ground. I cry. I tell you everything. I am destined to go to Hell. You are silent, and I know why. You cannot love me now. You cannot stand the hatred and brokenness inside of me.

    No matter what we breed
    We still are made of greed
    This is my kingdom come
    This is my kingdom come

    I look into your eyes. I am expecting rejection and anger. Instead, I see love and understanding. You whisper my name into my pointed ears. You are my savior, my lover, my Heaven.

    When you feel my heat
    Look into my eyes
    It's where my demons hide
    It's where my demons hide
    Don't get too close
    It's dark inside
    It's where my demons hide
    It's where my demons hide

    The demon roars in fury. It tries to push its way up into my head. But I fight it. I fight down that depression and anger and horror. I can feel my happiness and hope swarm out of the horrible monster's throat. You look into my eyes. I don't see a trace of 'her' in your eyes. I only see me.

    They say it's what you make
    I say it's up to fate
    It's woven in my soul
    I need to let you go

    I want to be with you. You know I love you. But with 'her' around, that is not possible. I need to learn to leash myself from your heart. I need to let you go...

    Your eyes, they shine so bright
    I wanna save that light
    I can't escape this now
    Unless you show me how

    You beg me not to leave you; you know I can't resist. I want to make you happy. And I know you can't escape from 'her'. Her claws are around you, like the demon's on my hope. Please... show me how to get out. I curl up against your warm body. I know my demon is slain for now. It is hiding, boxed up, in the throat of my happiness.

    When you feel my heat
    look into my eyes
    It's where my demons hide
    It's where my demons hide
    Don't get to close
    It's dark inside
    It's where my demons hide
    It's where my demons hide




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