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    dots Submission Name: Defenestration Imagination dots
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    Author: Kael Fenshir
    ASL Info:    26 / M / That weird place
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 17/57/52
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDefenestration Imagination dots
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    Take a stand you reckless boar
    In that kitchen sink
    Your mother washed you
    That sacred beastly whore
    Flipping through the late night channels
    Slightly beige'd color blinds left open
    Lamp post on the fritz
    Only a single light shining in
    Here he's mocking you
    Animal crackers in hand
    Never really caring
    Never gonna be your friend




    Submitted on 2013-11-06 23:13:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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       Jarring descriptions make me feel uneasy. Cool.
    | Posted on 2013-11-08 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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