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    dots Submission Name: Electricity dots
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    Author: nolram
    ASL Info:    29/M
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 58/61/32
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsElectricity dots
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    The electricity in the air is more than I ever dared imagine
    All alone more than ever before
    Come on baby send that chill down my spine
    I just wanna feel again
    Yeah I know when I feel now, I feel like it's my last minute on Earth
    I know I'm hard to be around
    But this is what I am, and what I've always been
    and you always told me to get to know myself
    I feel a constant nagging tightness in my chest that threatens




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