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    dots Submission Name: Just Like Thatdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.44 - 5/114/129
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    dotsJust Like Thatdots
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    Just like that.
    All the pain is back.
    Just like that.
    All my sadness is back.
    Just like that.
    Darkness has corrupted me once again.
    Just one glimpse,
    One look..
    And it's all back.
    I couldn't prevent it,
    I'm still to weak.
    To fragile.
    I thought i was finally ok,
    Finally had my head straight.
    Truth be told,
    I never had a hold in the first place.
    Not even one hand holding on.
    It's effects are just to strong,
    For little ole me.
    Someday i may try again.
    Try and become strong.
    But today..
    Everything swung back to dark thoughts...
    Just..
    Like..
    That..




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