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    dots Submission Name: Just Like Thatdots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    dotsJust Like Thatdots

    Just like that.
    All the pain is back.
    Just like that.
    All my sadness is back.
    Just like that.
    Darkness has corrupted me once again.
    Just one glimpse,
    One look..
    And it's all back.
    I couldn't prevent it,
    I'm still to weak.
    To fragile.
    I thought i was finally ok,
    Finally had my head straight.
    Truth be told,
    I never had a hold in the first place.
    Not even one hand holding on.
    It's effects are just to strong,
    For little ole me.
    Someday i may try again.
    Try and become strong.
    But today..
    Everything swung back to dark thoughts...

    Submitted on 2013-11-07 21:15:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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