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    dots Submission Name: Bystandersdots

    Author: Katastrophe6
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    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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    School-bell rings again
    Another day of students piling in
    Another day of fear and pain
    My happiness slowly fades away

    Classes begin
    Teachers teach
    Students sleep
    Everyday on repeat

    When will I be noticed
    When will people care
    Will others speak up
    Everyone's aware

    The populars talk
    The loners flock
    The preps come in with makeup and gawk
    Pricey clothes and good skin
    Everyones aware
    Bullying happens everywhere

    Students know it exist
    But let it slide
    Does anyone care
    Some victims die

    This is serious its not a joke
    Depression can kill
    Words do hurt

    End it now
    Before it's too late
    Step up to the plate
    Make a change

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