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    Author: Katastrophe6
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    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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    Everyone has stories
    Each one a different tale
    You don't have to listen
    Nor understand well

    My stories are not words from my mouth you see
    These stories are different much different you see
    No words can describe the sadness or pain
    But when you see scars you may think I'm insane

    I'm not insane not the least little bit
    I had too much stress I will admit
    I didn't want to die so I started to slit
    I don't hate my scars you see

    It shows I'm not PERFECT, I'm HUMAN, I'm ME




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