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Author: Katastrophe6
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Class/Type: Poetry /Being a Teen
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Everyone has stories
Each one a different tale
You don't have to listen
Nor understand well

My stories are not words from my mouth you see
These stories are different much different you see
No words can describe the sadness or pain
But when you see scars you may think I'm insane

I'm not insane not the least little bit
I had too much stress I will admit
I didn't want to die so I started to slit
I don't hate my scars you see

It shows I'm not PERFECT, I'm HUMAN, I'm ME

Submitted on 2013-11-08 10:36:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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