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    dots Submission Name: Inside This Cagedots
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    Author: Katastrophe6
    Elite Ratio:    0.35 - 0/1/5
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
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    dotsInside This Cagedots
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    These memories just won't fade
    It feels like I'm in a cage
    This cage is locked
    I can't escape
    I relive what's happened night and day
    A word or phrase brings back the pain
    Maybe my life is lived in vain
    But I cry at night, am I going insane?

    Things were fine for quite sometime
    Until you forgot I had feelings inside
    You got what you wanted
    Although I didn't think you would
    A date's for fun and hanging out
    Not for tears and pain, or for one person's gain

    Homecoming night you said I looked nice
    We went to the dance and I was so shy
    After the dance you were driving me home
    Took an off road to get me alone
    You turned my smile into a frown
    This whole night turned upside down




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