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Inside This Cage

Author: Katastrophe6
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Class/Type: Poetry /BrokenHeart
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Inside This Cage

These memories just won't fade
It feels like I'm in a cage
This cage is locked
I can't escape
I relive what's happened night and day
A word or phrase brings back the pain
Maybe my life is lived in vain
But I cry at night, am I going insane?

Things were fine for quite sometime
Until you forgot I had feelings inside
You got what you wanted
Although I didn't think you would
A date's for fun and hanging out
Not for tears and pain, or for one person's gain

Homecoming night you said I looked nice
We went to the dance and I was so shy
After the dance you were driving me home
Took an off road to get me alone
You turned my smile into a frown
This whole night turned upside down

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