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    dots Submission Name: Rhymedots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotsRhymedots
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    I can put most anything to a rhyme
    Just sit back
    Watch
    And give me a little time
    When I'm done with it
    You'll know me
    You'll know the pain I feel inside
    You can't hurt me
    My heart is stone
    I am nothing
    But skin and bone
    A waste of life
    With so much strife
    I'd rather just be left alone
    On my own
    Keep to myself
    Because I know
    There is no one
    Who understands me
    The way he does
    You can try to get to know me
    But I think you already know enough
    Enough to leave
    Get over me
    And maybe realize
    I'm not yours
    Anymore...




    Submitted on 2013-11-09 17:21:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You got me Teo...i love your works
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