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    dots Submission Name: Howl of Victorydots

    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
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    dotsHowl of Victorydots

    My friends and I have secrets
    You probably wouldn't believe
    You say you think you know me
    But I'm a completely different being
    With four legs and a tail
    I'm a vicious hunter of the night
    You see my old pack and I
    Don't underestimate our bite
    We leave scars for the fun of it
    You're dead by the time we're done with it
    You're useless to us now
    So we throw our heads back
    And let out an eerie howl
    A howl of your defeat
    This is
    Our howl of victory...

    Submitted on 2013-11-09 17:37:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      very cool write. I liked it a lot. you said so much in such little words, and that's why this is awesome.
    | Posted on 2013-11-16 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]
      Wasn't that what he got in trouble for, biting for the fun of it (no dedication)???

    | Posted on 2013-11-09 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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