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    dots Submission Name: That Daydots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.42 - 5/111/127
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThat Daydots
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    It's amazing isn't it.
    We all have our own path.
    Path that only we can follow.
    Although it's funny at the same time.
    We have our own paths,
    Our own destiny's.
    And yet.
    We all have the same destination.
    One place we all have to go,
    When we reach the end.
    End of this road.
    I smile now.
    Cause that's the day im looking most forward to.
    The day i want more than any other.
    To be put six feet under.
    Oh how i can't wait.
    For that day..




    Submitted on 2013-11-09 20:24:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i see a smile among the dandelions... as i go through your work i see that there is a bit of light here and there,so now i know that ur not as hopeless as u seem to think u are.

    Mwah,i'm glad.

    *pix
    | Posted on 2013-11-17 00:00:00 | by pixie_007 | [ Reply to This ]


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