Stage Fright by Katlord

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Submission Name: Stage Fright dots

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Author:	Katlord
ASL Info:	24/no thanks/my room
Elite Ratio:	2.17 - 375/199/101
Words:	75

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	787
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	625

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Stage Fright dots

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Step into a room full of people
Start
Shaking, shaking, shaking

Feel their gaze
They're
Waiting, waiting, waiting

Take a stand in front of them
Knees
Quaking, quaking, quaking

Tell them what they need to hear
Voice
Breaking, breaking, breaking

Try to stand proud, and tall
Room's
Swaying, swaying, swaying

Almost done, the closings near
Keep
Going, going, going

Step down, take a seat
They're
Cheering, cheering, cheering

Submitted on 2013-11-09 21:17:46 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I like this. You stuck firm to the form. You communicated a very personal, but very relate-able experience, and you kept it flowing nicely all the way to the finish. Please keep up the writes... I enjoy them, and I'm combing the new posts daily now, and will commit to commenting as many as I can.
| Posted on 2013-11-10 00:00:00 | by Passionbyapathy | [ Reply to This ]
I really like this. you did a really good job. I especially like the twist at the end.

Awesome!
| Posted on 2013-11-09 00:00:00 | by Zai | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.