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    dots Submission Name: Stage Frightdots

    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsStage Frightdots

    Step into a room full of people
    Shaking, shaking, shaking

    Feel their gaze
    Waiting, waiting, waiting

    Take a stand in front of them
    Quaking, quaking, quaking

    Tell them what they need to hear
    Breaking, breaking, breaking

    Try to stand proud, and tall
    Swaying, swaying, swaying

    Almost done, the closings near
    Going, going, going

    Step down, take a seat
    Cheering, cheering, cheering

    Submitted on 2013-11-09 21:17:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like this. You stuck firm to the form. You communicated a very personal, but very relate-able experience, and you kept it flowing nicely all the way to the finish. Please keep up the writes... I enjoy them, and I'm combing the new posts daily now, and will commit to commenting as many as I can.
    | Posted on 2013-11-10 00:00:00 | by Passionbyapathy | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this. you did a really good job. I especially like the twist at the end.

    | Posted on 2013-11-09 00:00:00 | by Zai | [ Reply to This ]

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