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    dots Submission Name: Go aheaddots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.44 - 5/114/129
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Death
    Total Views: 619
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 492



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    dotsGo aheaddots
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    Stab me,
    Shoot me.
    Try to and you'll see.
    My heart,
    Won't die.
    Trust me i've tried.
    My blood it pours,
    Straight out,
    Of my pores.
    Go ahead and try to,
    Kill me if you want to.
    You won't,
    Cause i can't.
    No matter how much blood is shed.
    I'm lost,
    On Earth.
    Have been ever since birth.
    So go ahead and try me,
    Maybe you can save Z.




    Submitted on 2013-11-09 21:59:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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