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    dots Submission Name: Longingdots

    Author: ALonesomeGuy
    Elite Ratio:    0.88 - 1/5/12
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    The world remains unchanging,
    A constant shade of grey,
    One day everything will be born anew,
    Or so i hope and pray.

    Those around me are content,
    To lead austere and simple lifes,
    But i would rather perish,
    To lay down my head and die.

    By day, my souls lone howl,
    By night, my hearts dear sob,
    My mind it always wanders,
    So close and so afar.

    Deep and distant jungles,
    Vast, untraveled seas,
    I hear their distant beckons,
    As they call out to me.

    My peers, they find it strange,
    Why i would want to go,
    To see untraveled, virgin lands,
    To abandon everything i know.

    The reason is so simple,
    But words cannot define,
    Those deep and mournful longings,
    Of this tortured heart of mine.

    So Like a master artist,
    I'll take that constant shade of grey,
    I'll paint the story of my life,
    Then I'll be on my way.

    Then they'll see the reason,
    That words cannot define,
    They'll hear those mournful longings,
    Of this tortured heart of mine.

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