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    dots Submission Name: One by Onedots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/132
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    dotsOne by Onedots
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    My friends,
    They abandon me.
    My family,
    They ignore me.
    Whether it be all at once,
    Or gradually overtime.
    One by One.
    They all leave me.
    One by One.
    They learn to hate me.
    One by One.
    I lose them all one...
    by..
    one..




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